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Darcy Chandler . . . Ben . . . Part 2
Contributed by
myheartsvoice
on
Thursday, 12th April 2007 @ 02:06:55 AM in AEST
Topic:
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With
a glass
in your hand
and a tear in
your eye
from
your window you watch
the world passing
by,
pondering
memories ever so frail
today is your yesterday and
your dreams are now
stale.
Now
all you are
is a wilting rose
an invisible some one
that nobody know's,
a
reduntant line
in an outdated poem
in a bottle of wine you've
now made your
home.
Oh
darcy chandler
look what life's done
the moon is now tainted
and gone is the sun,
with
faces all painted
and heart's on the run
i love you now come's
from the mouth
of a
gun.
Oh
darcy chandler
as sweet as a dove
inside of your heart there
was so much love, yet love
past you by for reasons
unknown now all that
you are is quite
alone.
But
lonliness
soon shall be
no more and the world
you'll no longer need,
the reeper's
reserved your place
on the floor that spot where
you go to
bleed.
And
bleed you will
'till bloodless you be
and your life remain's
no more, lying there still
like a tree that has fallen
cold and dead on the
floor.
Ben
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myheartsvoice
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2007-04-12 02:06:55]
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Re: Darcy Chandler . . . Ben . . . Part 2
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by myheartsvoice on
Thursday, 12th April 2007 @ 04:44:36 AM AEST
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Who ever you are thank you kindly for the vote
for this poem.
Ben |
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Re: Darcy Chandler . . . Ben . . . Part 2
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Thursday, 12th April 2007 @ 09:59:19 AM AEST
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Ben my friend this was a gripping, thrilling and very dark write. I have always liked your dark writes and I am so glad you have continued on with the Darcy Chandler series.
Do not look at that one star vote my friend, it is some loser who has nothing better to do and is trying to attract attention to themselves.
An excellent post penned very well.I thoroughly enjoyed this. Thanks so much for posting it and I look forward to the continuation of the series~
love & hugs your fan/friend,
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Re: Darcy Chandler . . . Ben . . . Part 2
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by emystar on
Thursday, 12th April 2007 @ 01:56:55 PM AEST
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Sad but well written as always, friend.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Darcy Chandler . . . Ben . . . Part 2
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by Dom on
Thursday, 12th April 2007 @ 10:14:14 PM AEST
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This is the first of your dark ones that I've read, and I really enjoyed it.
The images you create are so vivid, and you have narrated this story so well I felt a sort of empathy with Darcy Chandler.
I'm going now to hunt for the first part,
Dom |
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Re: Darcy Chandler . . . Ben . . . Part 2
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 25th April 2007 @ 02:05:42 PM AEST
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what a tragic moving poem... well woven words!
love n' hugs nessa |
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