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Blade
Contributed by
crow
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Tuesday, 10th April 2007 @ 11:06:00 PM in AEST
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InspirationalPoems
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Close your eyes.
Stand right here..
Yes..at the edge
where Mountains end
and Waters rise.
Draw your blade
though it be of thought"
deed, forgivness, anger, distain.
Imagine You as it`s Mother.
Feel..
Would you cast it aside.
Mountains create Meadows.
Waters wash dust from the day...
We should not linger.
Here..take my hand.. Vincent
Copyright ©
crow
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2007-04-10 23:06:00]
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Re: Blade
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 11th April 2007 @ 12:36:02 AM AEST
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Deep profound beauty, my friend. Such a soft
comfort and sweet stillness in this, Vincent.
Inspiring indeed. This held the ease of a warm
embrace ..
completely beautiful ~
~Breezy |
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Re: Blade
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by Channing on
Wednesday, 11th April 2007 @ 12:42:13 AM AEST
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Interesting write with very good description and feeling, good job!
-Channing- |
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Re: Blade
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by deadheadpoet on
Thursday, 12th April 2007 @ 08:16:02 AM AEST
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Vincent, I wonder why it is when one (such as I) goes through a bump in the road, that my poet friends, seem to talk to me through their work? I took much from this write. It was beautiful and something I so needed to read. (again, I've been seeing this happening with other's works) I am so thankful that I am able to read so many wonderful words here. What a fantastic bunch of poets at YPDC. Thanks for sharing.
Peace and hugs,
Laura |
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Re: Blade
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Thursday, 12th April 2007 @ 01:00:25 PM AEST
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Vincent~
Through the gentle softness of your beautifully penned words you reach and touch your readers heart. A most inspiring and uplifting piece of poetry. Thank you so much for sharing your wonderful poetry with us~
love & hugs,
sue m |
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Re: Blade
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by Nazmythian on
Friday, 13th April 2007 @ 03:28:59 AM AEST
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Very calm and soothing, like ... deep water.
I am glad I stopped here.
Nazmythian ~ |
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Re: Blade
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by positivelypurple on
Friday, 13th April 2007 @ 03:46:24 AM AEST
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Beautiful...wonderful and detailed imagery. Excellent!
Best,
Laurel |
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Re: Blade
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 28th April 2007 @ 07:24:39 AM AEST
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this is so pretty!
love n' hugs nessa
roses |
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