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Lives
Contributed by
nirvana12
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Tuesday, 10th April 2007 @ 04:43:14 AM in AEST
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If life was represented by a light mine would be quite dim and the only people standing under my light would be my family and a few friends. The girl that I love would be there and I hope her light shines bright and if for some reason it didn't I'd gladly give her my light. When this girl is happy you can see it in her eyes and whenever she's with me my light it shines so bright.
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Re: Lives
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by desireemiote on
Tuesday, 10th April 2007 @ 12:12:15 PM AEST
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simply put. straight to the heart. Only I would suggest using more line breaks. Still either way I love it.
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Re: Lives
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by Rhei76 on
Tuesday, 10th April 2007 @ 01:54:41 PM AEST
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It's nice to have one who helps you shine.
This is a good write, keep it up, simply sweet. |
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