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Forever my Love
Contributed by
nothingness
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Tuesday, 10th April 2007 @ 04:21:09 AM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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My world comes quickly to a pause
No one knows why, it just does
The silence driving me insane
Trying to remember why I came
I see your face fading away
Our love belonging to yesterday
Time changing before our eyes
With no memory of good byes
Where did you go that cloudy night?
What happened when you vanished from sight?
Was it frightful and full of pain?
Why didn’t you find me and try to explain?
You left me with out a single farewell word
If you had said goodbye I promise I’d have heard.
Now all I can think of is the day I lost you
If I could bring you back there isn’t anything I wouldn’t do
I will love you forever, there is no end
You were my love, my only true friend
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nothingness
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2007-04-10 04:21:09]
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Re: Forever my Love
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by Pinball on
Tuesday, 10th April 2007 @ 04:37:53 AM AEST
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| This is great but so sad! |
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Re: Forever my Love
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 10th April 2007 @ 12:22:19 PM AEST
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I'm so sorry for your loss.
Great writing.
huggs, luv, prayer,
emy |
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Re: Forever my Love
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by PhantomVampyress on
Wednesday, 11th April 2007 @ 02:25:46 AM AEST
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I am sorry to hear about your loss.. this is a beautiful write yet so sad.. remember he is watching over you now in heaven up above.. and he will live on forever in your heart.. beautifully written
vampyress jenni |
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Re: Forever my Love
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by positivelypurple on
Wednesday, 11th April 2007 @ 09:56:30 AM AEST
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| Wow...this gave me major goosebumps. I'm so sorry for your loss. |
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Re: Forever my Love
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by Vampirequeen on
Wednesday, 11th April 2007 @ 01:38:31 PM AEST
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| awww i an so sorry for your lost and feel sad that you never got to say goodbye to your boyfriend.take care |
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