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One For One
Contributed by
rhei76
on
Monday, 9th April 2007 @ 02:28:35 PM in AEST
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One for one, she said
At the foot of his bed
Telling him stories
To sooth his head
Stretched out from post to post
He clinches his teeth down on the gag
As she pour the wax across his chest
His muscles tighten
As she continues on
One for one, from dawn to dawn
She's loved him all along
Watching him from across the hall
And behind the walls
From the tender age, when they were young
But she was shy and taking care of her mom
Always keeping her hair up, glasses on
Her head down in the books
He was a soccer...king of the the field
Caught a scholarship and flew away to college
To her sadness he never stop to look
Six years went by
One for one was left all alone
For three years without her mom
She burried her nose in work
Until one day
She saw her man had came back home
She watched him as she has always done
Knowing he wouldn't be a junior by 21
Married and divorced by 23
Kicked out of school, lost to reality
Working only labor, wondering around
For another year before he made it home
One for one was still right there
Teaching where she first layed eyes on him
Living life so silent and solitude
Grading papers while day dreaming
Drinking a glass of wine
Every night until one day
One for one she said
At the foot of his bed
Telling him a story
To ease his head
She removed the wax
And rubs oil across his skin
Muscles still tight
As she take off the blind fold and gag
Saying from dawn to dawn
She loved him all along
And her voice fell silent
He looks at her and says
Jen, you're still beautiful
You know you could of just asked for a date
I about **** myself
I thought you were going to kill me at first
How did you get into my house, nevermind
I like it, I like you
I always have, but you never said anything
And I've always been a **** up
I just couldn't see me tainting someone so innocent
She looks into his eyes
Innocent
And with the snapping of the whip........
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Re: One For One
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 9th April 2007 @ 03:10:12 PM AEST
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| This is a really good poem. I don't care about what the moral freaks on here thinks, this is an awesome write! In fact it may give me the courage to write a poem I have been dying to write for some time.... |
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Re: One For One
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by ferasdour on
Monday, 9th April 2007 @ 03:28:45 PM AEST
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i too enjoyed this poem.
of course massochism mixed with care gets the result of enjoyment from the guy.
...... good times. good times.
which reminds me of a lords of acid song for some reason.
"i like it," |
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Re: One For One
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by Vampirequeen on
Tuesday, 10th April 2007 @ 01:04:59 AM AEST
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hmmm very interesting and different.
in fact i like this alot lol
you are very creative. |
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Re: One For One
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by Suzanna on
Tuesday, 10th April 2007 @ 01:06:41 AM AEST
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Oh this is a glorious poem, just think if she had told him she loved him from the start?
Nicole.x
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Re: One For One
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by needledancing on
Tuesday, 10th April 2007 @ 01:37:14 AM AEST
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Such an irony...I love the claims of innocense..as the whip is snapped.
I guess women will as mothers continue to have our restrictive view of correctness and age....I am human first...as such...how can I restrict love. Great piece. |
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Re: One For One
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by Kirby on
Tuesday, 10th April 2007 @ 01:47:40 AM AEST
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This poem is definately dark and romantic. Great write.
Kirby |
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Re: One For One
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by europeanprincess on
Saturday, 21st April 2007 @ 09:27:21 AM AEST
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| I read and I laughed. This was good. tell your friend that this is a really good one for her. Hope she liked it. |
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