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a glance for a glance (gets you nowhere)
Contributed by
ferasdour
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Monday, 9th April 2007 @ 02:04:21 PM in AEST
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oops
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A vision of a vision
Unique divisions
The decision
Only too soon;
To be noticeably seen,
The witch becomes
The warlock’s dreams.
As he retains a fear
Of her thoughts,
For he was not allowed to know,
The seer
Refused the bots
They have dreamed;
The show.
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ferasdour
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2007-04-09 14:04:21]
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Re: a glance for a glance (gets you nowhere)
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by Rhei76 on
Monday, 9th April 2007 @ 04:02:59 PM AEST
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Interesting, I like
but is it like a dream inside a dream
or reality a reflection of?
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Re: a glance for a glance (gets you nowhere)
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by needledancing on
Tuesday, 10th April 2007 @ 01:59:44 AM AEST
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It filled my head with a vision of two spirits dancing about a fire summoning up their powers to do battle against each other...and yet the dance became a passion of understanding...now how did you do that??
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