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That feeling
Contributed by
poetrygirl1991
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Monday, 9th April 2007 @ 09:33:14 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I get that feeling when im with you.
Like everythings perfect, nothing can go wrong.
i cant picture my life without you in it.
you are my everything
you make me weak
but simply strong
you make me smile
but you also make me cry
you make me learn
you make me hurt
and you make me heal
i can trust you with everything.
my heart has your name written all over it.
since the moment you said "i love you" for the first time...ive been the happiest person alive.
you said you wanna be with me once again.
and i wanna take you back so bad
but if i do, am i gonna be broken like this?
am i gonna hurt?
i cant handle being ripped apart like before.
id do anything for you,
but i just dont know anymore
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Re: That feeling
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by Kike420 on
Monday, 9th April 2007 @ 09:40:54 AM AEST
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| Guess it is hard to decide sometimes. I like your poem and hope you it turns out for the better |
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Re: That feeling
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by needledancing on
Tuesday, 10th April 2007 @ 02:12:51 AM AEST
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I am sure no Ann Landers but if those who love you try and protect you from pain...they do it because they can't stand seeing you in pain.
I always ask myself now...do I feel good when I am with this person..happy, whole, appreciated, full of trust, a princess , that no one can sway his heart or eyes for all time....and if a shadow of doubt crosses my mind..I put up my shield..slow down...and think until...all the answers are Yes, Yes...
Love protects you...it never hurts you. |
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Re: That feeling
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by inlovewithaladd on
Sunday, 19th August 2007 @ 12:23:04 AM AEST
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instead of commenting on content, i am commenting on form.
poorly written. this is such a bland and base piece. there is a way to do raw emotion well, and this is not it. |
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