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Winter Heart
Contributed by
crow
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Monday, 9th April 2007 @ 07:49:51 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Withered rose
old love letters,
held among dust and ribbons.
Winds blow through paneless
windows, cold stills the day.
Years were held,
empty hands,
hearts forever wait.
She dreamed alone....
dreams had not changed the day.
Prayed alone...
and know its hard to be alone.
Feel a winter heart,
gathering of leaves rush
from abandon corners
disturb nothing, what years have claimed.
Silent I return the rose,
gently close the door.
Believe she dances
this once lit cabin
still........Vincent
[I found this old cottage in the woods]
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crow
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2007-04-09 07:49:51]
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Re: Winter Heart
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 9th April 2007 @ 09:17:44 AM AEST
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Vincent, my friend this was so softly beautiful. Like
the ray of a sunbeam drenching your face in the dead of
winter. A pure and pleasant piece of warmth.
A lovely embrace of nostalgia washes over me as I
read. Touchingly sweet.
~Breezy
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Re: Winter Heart
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by Kike420 on
Monday, 9th April 2007 @ 09:28:22 AM AEST
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Wow, very well written and also nostalgic. Great poem
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Re: Winter Heart
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by shelby on
Monday, 9th April 2007 @ 09:49:25 AM AEST
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Hun this is beautiful, loved the verse and the pic. Yes we seem to keep missing eachother, funny I am hardly here these days either we just always seem to be on right wave it seems:)
huggers
Michelle |
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Re: Winter Heart
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by needledancing on
Monday, 9th April 2007 @ 01:16:56 PM AEST
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| A tender and very smooth read well paced and put together. |
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Re: Winter Heart
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by Dom on
Monday, 9th April 2007 @ 06:30:23 PM AEST
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Wonderful that an old abandoned cottage should inspire such a beautiful poem.
The words are so gentle, I can imagine this occurring by candlelight or as evening draws in.
Beautifully nostalgic,
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Re: Winter Heart
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by kye on
Monday, 9th April 2007 @ 11:07:05 PM AEST
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As I read your poem slowly, I savored every single word, like a reverent journey.
Your inspiration and the capacity to write in such a creative fashion, is not only your signature but a gift.
"Feel a winter heart,
gathering of leaves rush
from abandon corners
disturb nothing, what years have claimed"
I have re-read this several times and I am drawn to this stanza. I wish I had thought of it!
An excellent poem.
Kye
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Re: Winter Heart
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by Crow on
Tuesday, 10th April 2007 @ 10:33:59 AM AEST
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| thank you all so much for taking time to read me and your comments, I`m not here much but i`m coming to visit you all. thanks again. Vincent |
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Re: Winter Heart
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Thursday, 12th April 2007 @ 10:52:17 AM AEST
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Vincent this was so beautifully written. From an old abandoned cottage inspiration set forth and you produced this soft and beautiful write. Your poetry is such a delight to read. Keep up the wonderful work~
*many hugs*
Sue M |
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