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Honey Thank You For Your Love . . . Ben
Contributed by
myheartsvoice
on
Monday, 9th April 2007 @ 02:30:32 AM in AEST
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I wish i possessed the ultimate power
of love, so i could snap my fingers and
give you all for a life time, what it is i've
been lucky enough to have.
Dedicated to the women who's given me more
than i could ever hope for and perhaps more than
i deserve.
So
vast
may be
the universe
so deep may
be the sea,
and
yet
so
insignificant
without you they would
be.
So
colorful
the rainbow
so bright the
sun above,
and yet in tottal darkness
would i be without your
love.
What
good would be
the moonlight? in all it's
radiant bliss, without you in
my arms at night sharing
your sweet
kiss.
How
useless
all the stars would be
that fill the night time skies,
gone would be the glow replaced
by tears within there
eyes.
And
so my love permit me
just a moment of your time,
to tell you something more than
one could say whithin a
rhyme.
it's
just a little phrase
i offer quite simplisticly,
honey thank you for your love
you've alway's given
me.
Ben
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myheartsvoice
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Re: Honey Thank You For Your Love . . . Ben
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 9th April 2007 @ 02:50:54 AM AEST
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Ben, this was a beautiful moving piece filled with the
most loving thoughts and gratitude. You always have
a wonderful way of capturing the emotion of true love and
expressing it with profound and thankful grace. Kudos.
Your author's note is so very touching too.
Just lovely ~
~Breezy |
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Re: Honey Thank You For Your Love . . . Ben
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by needledancing on
Monday, 9th April 2007 @ 01:26:04 PM AEST
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A wonderful opening of a heart of gentleness, devotion and ability to reveal the inner self.
To worship the joy of another soul so completely. Well done. |
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Re: Honey Thank You For Your Love . . . Ben
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by emystar on
Monday, 9th April 2007 @ 02:19:03 PM AEST
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Beautifull, my friend.
Awesome.
huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Honey Thank You For Your Love . . . Ben
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Monday, 9th April 2007 @ 09:33:03 PM AEST
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Many *hugs* to you my dear friend. I so much needed a pick me up and I knew exactly where to go to find it. I found myself at your wonderful poetry pages once again.
Beautifully penned and expressed. Leaves the reader warm hearted and wearing a smile. A most touching,enchanting and beautifully composed masterpiece. Thanks once again for sharing with us your outstanding and magical poetry.
love, hugs & prayers your fan/friend,
sue m |
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Re: Honey Thank You For Your Love . . . Ben
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by PhantomVampyress on
Wednesday, 11th April 2007 @ 02:40:42 AM AEST
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beatiful dedication another lovely write
Vampyress jenni |
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