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the raven i have become
Contributed by
LadyDama
on
Wednesday, 26th February 2003 @ 06:20:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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wind chimes sing quietly
in the blowing wind
i sit alone
slowly inhaling my cigarette
listening to the night
why am i not in bed
next to my beloved
who sleeps peacefully?
it's hard to sleep
when thoughts race constantly
through my mind...
the raven i have become
tap tap tapping
at your windowpane
2-24-03 1:30 AM
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Re: the raven i have become
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by LOWMAN613 on
Wednesday, 26th February 2003 @ 11:44:49 AM AEST
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| Every time you write I see myself behind your pen so very true this is for me! Great one! Christina |
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Re: the raven i have become
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by roisin on
Wednesday, 26th February 2003 @ 10:31:15 PM AEST
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a memory of times past you've brought back so vividly to me... I had forgotten....well done..
rosie |
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Re: the raven i have become
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by Valerie_Pearson on
Thursday, 27th February 2003 @ 11:01:12 AM AEST
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| thats usually when the best words are found, well done, |
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Re: the raven i have become
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by bobotheclown on
Sunday, 2nd March 2003 @ 01:54:50 AM AEST
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Changed rather abruptly. This was good don't know why it changed though. Keep on feeling and posting.
Bobo (Joel)
P.S. thnx for commenting on my poems |
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Re: the raven i have become
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by riverofwords on
Tuesday, 4th March 2003 @ 05:13:59 AM AEST
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agrees best time and i have often been staring out the window late at night
excellent write
peace be your jouney
terry
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Re: the raven i have become
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by PhantomsLDY on
Friday, 7th March 2003 @ 02:19:31 AM AEST
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| This is really great I also refer to myself as a Raven though under different circumstances. I love the way you brought it together. |
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Re: the raven i have become
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by venkat on
Monday, 10th March 2003 @ 02:44:55 AM AEST
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| Raven... it is amazing your identification with a raven. I have many pictures of ravens, vampires, angels and a great collection of fantasy beings along with gods and goddesses.I feel raven is also a true spirit of nature... this poem is very interesting. venkat |
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Re: the raven i have become
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 10th March 2003 @ 06:39:19 PM AEST
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| love this, i've windchimes too, and sit at awake at night quite often, excellent write:) huggs nessa |
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