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my last kiss
Contributed by
richard_campbell
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Sunday, 8th April 2007 @ 12:19:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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The times we share our secret kiss.
Your huggs and smile i sure will miss.
The tears in your eye was a surprise
The sound of your voice will hunt me to-night
The look on your face ,i will remember always
Am so sorry i must end our involve-ment tonight.
I must erace your memory out right.
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richard_campbell
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2007-04-08 12:19:19]
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Re: my last kiss
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by poetrygirl1991 on
Monday, 9th April 2007 @ 09:38:44 AM AEST
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| cute and that really stinks |
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Re: my last kiss
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by needledancing on
Monday, 9th April 2007 @ 01:36:27 PM AEST
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It certainly isn't the kind of thing a person wants to hear...but it sure isn't the worst goodbye to get.
I mean it could say..I think your a drag
Your face needs a bag
Get out of my face
I need my space.
Right????
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Re: my last kiss
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by needledancing on
Tuesday, 10th April 2007 @ 04:01:35 AM AEST
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Having read and been enlightened this is a kiss...just a simple kiss of goodnight. In this light it speaks more of the ending of a connection while we are apart from one another.In such a light...it has a great beauty that a kiss can be so symbolic of the missing while apart.
Sometimes looking to quickly can spin my head on backwards. |
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Re: my last kiss
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 24th April 2007 @ 02:21:26 PM AEST
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this is beautiful richard, so filled with emotion..
love n' hugs nessa |
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