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for all the feelings you can't feel
Contributed by
brittanycollette
on
Sunday, 8th April 2007 @ 06:52:21 AM in AEST
Topic:
dedicatedpoems
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all alone and crying in the corner of the dark.
searching for an answer through the window, finding nothing.
silence closing in, asphyxiating any hope.
reaching for a smile, for tomorrow
give me anything.
constantly i wonder if i ever cross your mind,
or if these memories i hold close mean something.
you and me and the way it used to be.
caught in a dream, contradicting my truths.
easy to believe that nothing is real.
besides what i feel.
these tears bursting out of my thoughts,
running from the emptiness that nobody sees.
and nobody cares. about anyone else.
and if i could take you with me for a moment.
lock it up inside a dream.
clarify reality
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Re: for all the feelings you can't feel
(User Rating: 1 ) by deadheadpoet on
Sunday, 8th April 2007 @ 10:22:59 AM AEST (User
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Hmmm there are so many aspects of this piece I like. I suppose it's rawness.... it's realness. There were things I could see clearly in your words. Great write.
Peace, Laura |
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