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Oh So Beautiful
Contributed by
unknown_utopia
on
Friday, 6th April 2007 @ 05:43:18 PM in AEST
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I am almost ready to flow
to a zone
that is
tranquil
and oh so beautiful.
Innervisions slowly undulate
and I
start to sway
as sweet sensations
of love
caress
like a kiss.
I float
like a feather
as I drift on a breeze,
and I smile
and flap my angel wings...
The fires of heaven
sensually
wraps around me,
I feel only happiness
I am finally free.
Sensations are thrilling
as the feeling of love
overflows
Tears of joy crescendo and explode,
I hear voices whispering
softly calling to me
something is coming
and it's oh so beautiful.
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Re: Oh So Beautiful
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by emystar on
Friday, 6th April 2007 @ 06:20:39 PM AEST
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Wo Tony,
this write is breathe taking.
Very powerfull, beautifull, heavenly write.
One can feel with you as these words just reach out grab ya by the heart.
Big huggs, mucho luv,smiles,
emy |
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Re: Oh So Beautiful
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by Spike on
Friday, 6th April 2007 @ 08:57:15 PM AEST
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Way cool - lovely descriptive passages and the thrill of soft anticipation. The concluding repetition of the last line of the first stanza neatly ties end and beginning. This reads like a guided meditation - I might use it for that, if you don't mind. Well done!
Spike |
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Re: Oh So Beautiful
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by Suzanna on
Saturday, 7th April 2007 @ 12:20:40 AM AEST
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This poem is 'Oh so beautiful' in its self, I think you have trully grasped and expressed love, it was a pleasure to read.
Nicole.x |
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Re: Oh So Beautiful
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by Silent-No-More on
Saturday, 7th April 2007 @ 01:23:03 PM AEST
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I absolutely agree with everything Spike said in his comment. Wonderful piece and...
those last four lines are perfect, really.
Nicely done-
~Snemmy |
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Re: Oh So Beautiful
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 18th April 2007 @ 01:28:27 PM AEST
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beautiful, and oh so flowing...
love n' hugs nessa |
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Re: Oh So Beautiful
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Wednesday, 16th May 2007 @ 04:00:00 AM AEST
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Beautiful and breath taking.. Well written.. Very much enjoyed reading this..
Take care
Christina |
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