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Cracked Miracles
Contributed by
Valerie_Pearson
on
Wednesday, 26th February 2003 @ 05:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I pray for them that have no home,
tears I cry as I sit alone,
people wonder why they steal,
the truth is tears they can't reveal,
they've been through hell,
as you can see,
thats why I cry these tears in me,
Although they don't show it,
but inside they know
that they've been through it,
and we have to ....,
they look for answers that they can't find,
then look back ... they rewind,
They find the answers that they have lost,
they find the miracle in the cross,
the broken miracles split into,
they put them together and
found there home,
they found their truth!
Written By: Nathan Pearson
Copyright ©
Valerie_Pearson
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2003-02-26 05:00:00]
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Re: Cracked Miracles
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by venkat on
Wednesday, 26th February 2003 @ 05:36:14 AM AEST
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| Wow! he has lot of talent. he has social awareness as well as a good potic heart. much better than so many. convey my blessings.. venkat. |
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Re: Cracked Miracles
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by DreamWeaver on
Wednesday, 26th February 2003 @ 06:49:02 AM AEST
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| Nathan ... this is outstanding .. y ou have come so far in such a short time - your poem shines with rhyme, rhythm and flow - and so obviously written from the heart - it is a beautiful piece of poetry. Well done. ... Jan |
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Re: Cracked Miracles
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by Fwog on
Wednesday, 26th February 2003 @ 07:24:18 AM AEST
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This is so beautifully worded Nathan, i just can't wait to show my street kids, they will love it.
Your heart shines so brightly and I thank you for sharing this.
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Re: Cracked Miracles
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by LOWMAN613 on
Wednesday, 26th February 2003 @ 11:46:44 AM AEST
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| Nathan I see your mother has rubbed off on you,True inspiration from her! You keep writing,your work is well done!Christina |
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Re: Cracked Miracles
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by Wrybod on
Wednesday, 26th February 2003 @ 12:16:50 PM AEST
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Val.....Special....very special ....you can be very proud. It's one thing to write poetry when it comes easily but to write it when it needs so much more effort and concentration is something else. More than that it's as good as any other on YPDC.
Does Nathan have any specialist help or is it all down to Mum and his own deternination? |
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Re: Cracked Miracles
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by Wrybod on
Wednesday, 26th February 2003 @ 12:26:25 PM AEST
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Nathan, A very special poem by a poet who understands people. Apologies for responding to your moher when it should have been to the AUTHOR OF THE POEM.
Looking forward to another soon |
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Re: Cracked Miracles
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 1st March 2003 @ 12:49:58 AM AEST
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Nathan @-<<-
this is beautiful! i am looking forward to more poetry from you, big huggs for you and mom, love nessa |
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Re: Cracked Miracles
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by LadyDama on
Sunday, 2nd March 2003 @ 03:58:37 AM AEST
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| beautiful, special and heartfelt write, dear Nathan... full of empathy and precious sentiment for those less fortunate... this is so well written, with your rhyming prose and absolute unconditional love for the world around you... inspiring, knowing where you come from and the trials of everyday... blessings to you and your strength in poetry... |
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Re: Cracked Miracles
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by Angelic_Demon on
Sunday, 23rd November 2003 @ 08:19:34 PM AEST
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Bloody hell kid. Nathan, this is really good. I was talking to your mom earlier, and she sent me to read this poem that you wrote. You've really got a lot of talent. (Val, why in the world don't you get him to write more, eh?)
Cracked Miracles indeed. I wonder why people can be like that too. Thanks for having your mother put this up here.
Love ya' and your mom,
Mara |
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Re: Cracked Miracles
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 28th June 2004 @ 02:12:47 PM AEST
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Nathan, this is an amazingly strong and powerful piece of work. I am truly thrilled that you understand that faith is the key to life. So many young people do go through tough times but find when they allow faith into their being that life gets much better and they become much strong. You are an amazing poet, young sir. My very best to you. Keep up the excellent work.
Hugs,
Rita |
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