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Peace
Contributed by
kingt
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Wednesday, 26th February 2003 @ 04:20:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
AmericanTragedy
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There is love
and there is hate
There was a begining
and there was fate
How many violent deaths each day?
What is the estimate?
What do we do with this?
Thing called peace
Live in it
Or rest in it
How do we stop the killing
of human race
.... Ya better think twice
cause reality
it's tough to face
someday it might be
too late
to make the hate reach its fate
Copyright ©
kingt
... [
2003-02-26 04:20:00]
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Re: Peace
(User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on
Wednesday, 26th February 2003 @ 04:39:10 AM AEST
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| you r poem sonds good and it is pretty . there is unnecessary break up between lines 7 and 8 with a question mark. or if you feel it necessary 8 th line should start in a different way. good wishes as you are new to this site. venkat |
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Re: Peace
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by PhantomsLDY on
Tuesday, 11th March 2003 @ 04:09:29 AM AEST
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| This is beautiful and I love it just the way it is. |
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