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Waiting on Time
Contributed by
k2kdesigner
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Thursday, 5th April 2007 @ 07:20:43 AM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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I'm happy now that I'm away.
Although I still think of you everyday.
I wonder if your eating
I pray that you are sleeping
Don't worry about me I'll be fine
You will too, just wait on Time
Remember the good times and forget the bad
We could've made the world jealous of what we had
then suddenly our dear friend Time slipped outta grasp
and the whole concept now is hard to clasp
We will move on, we will get better
Time will catch up we just have to let her
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2007-04-05 07:20:43]
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Re: Waiting on Time
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by runawaynameless on
Thursday, 5th April 2007 @ 08:34:11 AM AEST
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| that was very touching. |
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Re: Waiting on Time
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by Loriann on
Friday, 6th April 2007 @ 05:44:09 AM AEST
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This is a very nice write. It is a shame to have to let things like this happen but sometimes it has to be. Well done.
Loriann |
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Re: Waiting on Time
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Friday, 6th April 2007 @ 06:23:25 AM AEST
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This was a well written poem. It hurts when a relationship ends and you can;t seem to rise above it and move on. But hang in there time will come. It is hard though waiting. Great poem.
Take care
Christina |
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Re: Waiting on Time
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by EddieDean on
Friday, 6th April 2007 @ 02:43:45 PM AEST
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Wow, a very dear friend of mine ended a 4 year relationship a couple months ago, thankfully he's moved on.
Thank you for this write, it illustrates what I've been telling him from day 1, thank you.
Very good work
Mike |
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Re: Waiting on Time
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by sidneyconrad23 on
Tuesday, 9th November 2010 @ 05:43:22 AM AEST
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| God job just keep on writting you do have a gift. |
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