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Your voice
Contributed by
runawaynameless
on
Tuesday, 3rd April 2007 @ 01:36:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I used to know how to be happy,
Being with you and our friends,
We had a secret though that was never to come out.
It was ok to have a secret,
the things you said made them ok.
Now I have voices in my head
with your voice,
I want them to leave.
I thought I knew you,
with the lies you told.
One lie destroyed everything,
we cant even be friends.
I wish I could take it back,
I wish I could take you back.
I dont want you in my head,
I want the rational part of me back.
I trusted with everything I knew,
and now im not sure how to trust.
I dont want you back,
I miss you,
but I dont want you back.
You destroyed the part of me,
the part that everyone loved.
I dont know how to keep myself from falling,
I dont know how to keep sane.
I will destroy everything you have,
anything in my power anyway.
I hope you lose everything,
because you took everything from me.
My soul will recover,
in hopes to be stronger.
I hate your lies,
I hate that I hear you,
I hate when people talk to me,
I hate when I see your face...
Your not even here and all I think of is you.
I want you to be gone,
I want him to be able to talk to me,
and for me to recognize,
hes not you.
I can hope he cares,
you didnt,
so why should he?
You ***** my mind up.
You ***** me up.
I hate you,
because I dont know how to be happy,
I dont know how to be happy with him.
My hate is inevitable.
But they shouldnt have to take it because something you did.
I wish I could be happy again,
but I cant get your voice out of my head!
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runawaynameless
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2007-04-03 13:36:28]
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Re: Your voice
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by sadaddy on
Tuesday, 3rd April 2007 @ 01:57:16 PM AEST
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The pain and hurt you feel is felt in every word you have written. The hate and anger you feel at this moment will one day subside once you have let out all of your frustrations. By writing about how you feel will help you taken the right step in releasing your anger and allow you to move on with your life. May your heart be filled with peace and joy one day.
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Re: Your voice
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by doug on
Tuesday, 3rd April 2007 @ 03:12:00 PM AEST
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It seems this writing is
pure emotion let loose.
I can only say that I hope
that this persons memory
fades soon so that you
might find some measure
of peace again. Good luck ,
Truly , Doug |
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Re: Your voice
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 3rd April 2007 @ 03:41:07 PM AEST
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Sad but incredibly written. I've been there before.
Great work.
Hang tuff.
Big huggs,
emy |
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Re: Your voice
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by Rhei76 on
Wednesday, 4th April 2007 @ 02:49:41 PM AEST
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| I know things will never be the same. We will never sit altogether, in song and drunkness, The secrets ya'll kept, have change the appearrance of my friends. You so sad, the pain that grows on the page, show damage he did. But you have the biggest heart I know, you drop everything to make sure any of your friends can fall on you, don't let the pain change your eyes. We will just keep him away from you. It sux that I'm down here while ya'll go thru this. Just ignore his whinny voice, and focus creative, you're doin' good getting it out. Well sweety my IM isn't logging on. I'll be back @ my sspace. |
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Re: Your voice
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by Drapes on
Saturday, 7th April 2007 @ 07:03:06 AM AEST
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| A very honest, saddening write.. This piece goes beyond words... there's no way I can praise you for it.. perfect is an understatement. I feel this piece deep in the pit of my stomach.. knowing how you feel and what it's like.. it reminds me of the part of my life i avoid thinking about.. i don't know how to trust again and how to realize that my new 'him' is not HIM. when you find a way, let me know.. best wishes to you - Drapes |
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Re: Your voice
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by heaviestcat on
Friday, 20th April 2007 @ 09:26:22 AM AEST
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| wow! Good writing but you need an uplift. read Bluto's Doorknb |
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Re: Your voice
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by heaviestcat on
Friday, 20th April 2007 @ 09:26:25 AM AEST
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| wow! Good writing but you need an uplift. read Bluto's Doorknb |
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Re: Your voice
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by CrimsonTears on
Saturday, 5th May 2007 @ 04:32:28 PM AEST
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i know this feeling all to well...i love my ex still very much....but i dont want to get back together i dont think i could handle it....great write
Lots of Love
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