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Changes
Contributed by
jerseysue
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Tuesday, 3rd April 2007 @ 04:33:27 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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In one tiny moment things can change
And your whole life is rearranged
Because of this I am on my guard
For life can be so long and hard
I make no plans for I know
How awry sometimes those plans go
I at one time planned out all my life
But death it came and caused me strife
So now I live from day to day
I cannot lose If I play it that way
I know how easy problems arise
And dreams they disappear before my eyes
So I believe that now I can really cope
Away from the days when I had no hope
I make no rules just go with the flow
And hope that fate does not bring blows
Maybe I am really pessimistic
No not really, I am just realistic
I know life is not all it seems
Because making plans can shatter dreams
So nightmares come sometimes at night.
Daytime can seem dark not bright
But I survive the best I can
Because now my life it has no plan
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Re: Changes
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 3rd April 2007 @ 04:05:43 PM AEST
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Very good write here.
One day at a time and even then can go awry.
Awesome work, friend.
Big huggs,
emy |
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Re: Changes
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 4th April 2007 @ 04:12:39 AM AEST
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It seems to me suex, my Brit buddy, you have become enlightened (aware) of one of the danged awfullest realities some call the twist o' fate. Best we can do is take all o' that awareness and stuff it under our arm and serendipitously run with the free spirit of the wind. Bend, don't break, when those ol' see winds blow onto your island. And run shamelessly naked in your glass house! Dat'll get the gossip goin'. Keep yer chin up and smile that nice smile I know ya got. Good write here.
wabl
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Re: Changes
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 15th April 2007 @ 08:07:02 AM AEST
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ditto, my sentiments too, excellent write:)
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Changes
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by Rylo on
Wednesday, 29th August 2007 @ 06:00:41 AM AEST
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| A very sad write, I for one know how it is to lose that special someone who is very dear to the heart. I also know how it is to give up on planning life's paths out, but keeping faith and always believing. Will keep you strong, and help you though any storm that may come your way. Awesome writing |
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