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Faint Hopes
Contributed by
Balmain_Tiger
on
Sunday, 1st April 2007 @ 10:34:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Once I thought trading places
As I watched all those faces
Into oblivion was the stare
Not one face took the dare
For so many years I have tried
Where once or twice I even cried
The very first I looked in your eyes
My heart my life would fill with sighs
With the wish for one day
And all those days I did pray
Now finally I get a chance
I really hope that we can dance
For even now I do know
It’s your kindness that is on show
You know very well I am no saint
And yes I know my chance is faint.
To make you happy every day
To show you love in every way
I now prepare for the time
For which I did write this rhyme
Monday, April 02, 2007
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Re: Faint Hopes
(User Rating: 1 ) by Kimberlynn on
Tuesday, 3rd April 2007 @ 03:59:11 AM AEST (User
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Good job, you write very well. Keep it up! |
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