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Confusion and Contemplation
Contributed by
Fahlia
on
Sunday, 1st April 2007 @ 10:02:32 PM in AEST
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Left to my own deivces
While sanity slips away
Stuck in these crushing vices
Wondering if I should stay
As I sit in the corner
I contemplate life
Wondering if it's all worth
All the stuggle and strife
Couldn't even bare the thought
Of never knowing the truth
Seeing people fighting people
Elders fighting the youth
Doesn't seem to fit me
All the depression and sorrow
Do you think I'll be the same
When you see me on the 'morrow
Copyright ©
Fahlia
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2007-04-01 22:02:32]
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Re: Confusion and Contemplation
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by Dom on
Monday, 2nd April 2007 @ 06:47:18 PM AEST
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I really liked this poem because for me it touched on how life can feel futile when humanity keeps making the same mistakes:
'Seeing people fighting people
Elders fighting the youth '
But then I also agree with the final part of the poem that as an individual we are always changing and the more we consider these cycles the more it helps to avoid them, because they are as much applicable to one individual as they are to all humanity.
Thought provoking,
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Re: Confusion and Contemplation
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by doug on
Tuesday, 3rd April 2007 @ 12:00:23 AM AEST
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I have always questioned everything.
Even those things people warned
that I should not question. I've tried to
avoid , in my life , the futile ways in
which other people waste their own.
It is always difficult to go against all
the blind maddnes that drives the
world. I believe we will know the truth
someday and if not than I shall make
my own. Loved your poem. As you can
see it brought out many emotions from
me. Take care , Truly , Doug
P.S. I hope to find you happy and well
on the 'morrow. |
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