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one last dance [complete]
Contributed by
navnaf
on
Sunday, 1st April 2007 @ 04:36:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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one last dance..
there's nothing like your kiss
the bitter softness of your lips
a feeling ive never felt
like an amazing hand i've been dealt
up late thinking of my crime
only in my thoughts i confine
you say my love is fake
what about these nights lying awake?
easy? try and tell me how
if only you could see me now
night after night i write
all for one light
where are you now?
are you happy?
does he make you feel the way i did?
does it hurt?
im in pain
with nothing left to gain
feeling your essence when your near
nothing i wouldn't give to have you here
its been a while i know
***** cupid, and his stupid bow
uve been the only girl i trust
i promise what we had wasnt just lust
your heart beating beneath my skin
a kiss i lay apon your chin
i need to stop missing you
before this knife goes through
give me a chance
may i have one last dance?
Copyright ©
navnaf
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2007-04-01 16:36:50]
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Re: one last dance [complete]
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by Soccerflyer27 on
Sunday, 1st April 2007 @ 05:04:52 PM AEST
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| Beautiful. Very touching and meaningful. Great write! |
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Re: one last dance [complete]
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by CrimsonTears on
Saturday, 5th May 2007 @ 04:37:30 PM AEST
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i feel this way as well....it hurts so much...i can only hope the pain will soon diminish...great write
Lots of Love
CrimsonTears |
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Re: one last dance [complete]
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 22nd May 2014 @ 11:08:54 AM AEST
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great imagery mixed with longing, a beautiful write,
hugs n' love nessa |
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