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The betrayal
Contributed by
aloneinthememory
on
Saturday, 31st March 2007 @ 07:01:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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The betrayal
Hurts like hell
I feel so cold
So empty
Like blood.
My soul feels jagged
Sharp and broken
Like shattered glass.
My heart feels nothing anymore
And to think
It's all because of you.
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aloneinthememory
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2007-03-31 19:01:14]
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Re: The betrayal
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by Wachumiri on
Saturday, 31st March 2007 @ 09:49:54 PM AEST
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Wow... all the stress worked itself well into words. Anger and frustration, they all fit together very well. Take care,
David
P. S. Better days, dream of better days, pain won't last forever |
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Re: The betrayal
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by Rockalife66 on
Friday, 29th June 2007 @ 03:13:51 PM AEST
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| Wow that was great! But I hope nothing bad happened to you though. We all have some rough times, some bad falls. I wish you the best of luck whatever happened. *hugs* God Bless you and take care. |
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