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Give up
Contributed by
Loriann
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Saturday, 31st March 2007 @ 05:23:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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Maybe I should just give up.
Especially with my bad luck.
always losing at everything I do.
And here it is I finally lost you.
Tried so hard to win your heart.
But I didnt know how I am not that smart.
Maybe I should just give it up.
Especially with my bad luck.
Cannot seem to do anything right.
And I sit alone at home every single night.
watching the t.v. and all the happy loves.
While I sit downhere wishing on all the stars above.
But nothing ever goes my way.
It is like this every single day.
My heart remains empty and broken apart.
And I think it has been like that from the very start.
Maybe I should give up.
Just with the way I have such bad luck.
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Loriann
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2007-03-31 17:23:30]
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Re: Give up
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by needledancing on
Saturday, 31st March 2007 @ 10:54:38 PM AEST
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| I am glad your friend has your support. It sounds like her self esteem has been smashed to smithers...you have written a piece that certainly reflects how she feels. If she believes it's all a matter of luck that can be sad too.I hope she gets out the door more and finds some smiles and happiness. Good work. |
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Re: Give up
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by Dom on
Sunday, 1st April 2007 @ 02:55:22 PM AEST
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I am very sorry that your friend is experiencing such an unhappy state of mind.
As ND put it is good that you are such a caring friend.
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Re: Give up
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Sunday, 1st April 2007 @ 04:59:29 PM AEST
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I'm so sorry to hear that this is what your friend is going through. With love and support from a good friend like yourself she'll get right back on her feet again. It's good to know that she has a wonderful friend like you to help see her through her troubled times.
The best of wishes to you both.
Hugs,
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