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The secret that lies behind these eyes
Contributed by
chopstix
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Saturday, 31st March 2007 @ 01:20:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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My heart is trapt
My feelings hidden
I hide all the torment inside
behind a sea of fake smiles
my heart holds all the secrets
secrets that can only be seen threw my sad eyes
the sadness is to much to bear
to much to control
the tears begin to flow
unleashing a storm of unfelt emotions
my heart no longer beats
my soul no longer whole
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chopstix
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2007-03-31 13:20:44]
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Re: The secret that lies behind these eyes
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by twick on
Sunday, 1st April 2007 @ 05:37:15 AM AEST
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it seems unfinished somehow and the like "behind a sea of fake smiles" I don't know if that means you're surrounded by people that feel just like you or that you "fake smile" all the time.
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Re: The secret that lies behind these eyes
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by chopstix on
Friday, 27th April 2007 @ 10:08:28 PM AEST
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| you know your probably right i think ill go over this agian lol thanks for the input :) |
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