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She Thought It Was A Lie-less Love, but It Was Just A Loveless Lie
Contributed by
FallenNeko
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Saturday, 31st March 2007 @ 10:12:30 AM in AEST
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There was a dream,
There was a guy,
There was a girl,
Living a lie.
She just KNEW it was love,
Right from the start,
But something changed,
Deep down in their hearts.
Her friends told her no,
He told her yes,
You know whom she went with?
Take one small guess.
She went with they boy,
Whose love was a lie,
She ditched all her friends,
For one single guy.
Then she saw,
What she hadn’t dare see,
She saw what he was…
Then came crying to me.
She wanted help,
From her family and friends,
But by then,
She was stuck, at life’s very end.
He ruined her life,
She ruined her friends,
Now her life is a mess,
And it’s too late for amends.
We helped her once,
But she just turned back,
Now you know where she is?
In his arms, ya… she went back.
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Re: She Thought It Was A Lie-less Love, but It Was Just A Loveless Lie
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by yackerz85 on
Saturday, 31st March 2007 @ 12:07:02 PM AEST
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| To be honest, I really just read this because the title is cool. But yeah, this is some deep stuff. I feel for you, and I hope she can change her mind and make the right decision. |
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Re: She Thought It Was A Lie-less Love, but It Was Just A Loveless Lie
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by purplestary on
Saturday, 31st March 2007 @ 02:32:50 PM AEST
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| nice write. I have been on both ends of this so i relate to this really well. |
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Re: She Thought It Was A Lie-less Love, but It Was Just A Loveless Lie
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by rcsparkie123 on
Saturday, 31st March 2007 @ 05:12:24 PM AEST
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| I wish I could go bak to him |
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Re: She Thought It Was A Lie-less Love, but It Was Just A Loveless Lie
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by bratty_wifey209 on
Tuesday, 3rd April 2007 @ 05:55:42 AM AEST
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| this is beatiful, well expressed and hit me right in the face.........thank you so much for sharing your talent.... |
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