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A Longing
Contributed by
MuhammadShanazar
on
Saturday, 31st March 2007 @ 06:37:09 AM in AEST
Topic:
spiritual
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Sometimes some serene spectacles,
Make me mad when wondering,
Think I on flavorous sweetness,
Experienced I soaring through spheres,
The higher, the bluer and more silent,
Than our earth and its polluted zones.
Flown was I straight and supine,
Travelled upwards, headlong, viewing,
Beneath the galaxy ladder like,
With moderate slow slanting rise,
Myriad stars shone and shone bright,
As at mid day a highway is enlightened,
Like dots or silvery scattered coins,
Stretched far above and down unendingly.
At one moment when I stopped,
To behold behind to the distances,
Immense covered of the spaces,
Bluish but brightened washed,
At the far end I found a globe,
Smaller than the sun at sunset,
With milky light, and greenish core,
Still, with no flickering flashes,
Enchanted mind, captivated my heart,
Now I long for to have a glimpse,
Just once again if possible,
In exchange of property and life,
And all its sensuous belongings.
Copyright ©
MuhammadShanazar
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2007-03-31 06:37:09]
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Re: A Longing
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by needledancing on
Saturday, 31st March 2007 @ 10:11:36 AM AEST
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| A very splendid write. The eyes have captured what was seen and written it to word with a wonderful flow of the most accurate of words. |
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Re: A Longing
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by deadheadpoet on
Saturday, 31st March 2007 @ 01:00:28 PM AEST
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I wonder my brother, indeed about this intense longing. It is a beautiful expression of writing, as always. This was my favorite:
"Enchanted mind, captivated my heart,
Now I long for to have a glimpse,
Just once again if possible,
In exchange of property and life,
And all its sensuous belongings."
Thank you for sharing.
Peace,
Laura |
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Re: A Longing
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 27th April 2007 @ 06:19:39 AM AEST
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an excellent write, so beautiful....
love n' hugs nessa
roses |
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