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Battered Rocks
Contributed by
deadheadpoet
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Friday, 30th March 2007 @ 01:47:45 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Waves rolling to shore
Crashing on the battered rocks
of which I stand on.
Penned 3-11-07
Laura Horner
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deadheadpoet
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2007-03-30 01:47:45]
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Re: Battered Rocks
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by needledancing on
Friday, 30th March 2007 @ 08:21:16 AM AEST
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| Good write..Haiku has only been tried once by myself and I'm still on shaky ground with that one..so this is a wonderful example that works beautifully. |
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Re: Battered Rocks
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 30th March 2007 @ 12:23:51 PM AEST
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laura, I can see clearly why this is inspirational
to you. .. glad you are surviving and hoping for ease of
burdens more and more every day. :)
Beautifully expressed ~
*hugs*
~Breezy |
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Re: Battered Rocks
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by yangdantien on
Friday, 30th March 2007 @ 12:46:01 PM AEST
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A natural meditative resonance. Where you stand shows how water is stronger than rock. Fluid and consistent the spray baptizes the soul as earth child.
Peace
AJ |
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Re: Battered Rocks
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by Dom on
Friday, 30th March 2007 @ 01:05:15 PM AEST
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I love how this haiku really makes you shine through as a survivor, maybe tired and frightened, but still standing tall as your foundation crumbles.
I like the fighting spirit in this.
Dom |
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Re: Battered Rocks
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Sunday, 1st April 2007 @ 05:27:20 PM AEST
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Dearest Laura~
I have never attempted haiku before, but I must say you penned this so well my dear friend. May the heavy burdens be lifted from your beautiful loving heart and may you conquer all that tries to keep you down. You're a born fighter. Spread your wings and fly high my sweet friend I know you can do it. I have the utmost faith in you~
faith, hope & determination always~
love, hugs and prayers,
sue m |
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Re: Battered Rocks
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by MisfitMe on
Saturday, 7th April 2007 @ 02:10:36 PM AEST
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POWERFUL!!!
Period.
~me |
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Re: Battered Rocks
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 10th April 2007 @ 05:51:23 AM AEST
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A thousand word essay in seventeen syllables. My standard in "rating" haiku. Whether read with imagination or clairvoyance, the whole essay is there. Nice job, Laura.
wabl
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Re: Battered Rocks
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by derb on
Saturday, 14th April 2007 @ 12:15:57 PM AEST
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| i hope you don't mind another comment from me. i've read several of your poems and my ability is nowhere near yours, but i can appreciate your writing and how it creates such vivid images in my mind. i see this poem as being optimistic - i hope it is. |
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Re: Battered Rocks
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 30th April 2007 @ 07:03:10 AM AEST
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absolutely beautiful....
love n' hugs nessa
roses |
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