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Brain Wave:
Contributed by
richard_campbell
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Thursday, 29th March 2007 @ 11:09:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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We can hear ,
see and smell.
taste,feel and move.
run ,dance and jump
clapping our hands and stomp
thinking is an amazing thing.
yet some of us drink,smoke and lie
thief,kill and cry.ever wonder why?
its because we don't think.
we are an amaizing thing.
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richard_campbell
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2007-03-29 23:09:11]
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Re: Brain Wave:
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by FRANCO on
Thursday, 29th March 2007 @ 11:15:31 PM AEST
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it has a thought provoking message with great insight.
Great things come in small packages and your poem is one such work of art.
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Re: Brain Wave:
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by needledancing on
Friday, 30th March 2007 @ 08:24:25 AM AEST
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| Truer words have never been spoken. The hardest thing for humans to do is love themselves...and yet nothing happens until they do...they live outside of themselves until they can accomplish this...your piece is an excellent reminder. |
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Re: Brain Wave:
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by aloneinthememory on
Saturday, 31st March 2007 @ 09:30:19 PM AEST
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I like this alot. it has a huge impact (and a point) in a very short poem. Thats hard to do. I applaud you.
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