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Empty On My Breath.

Contributed by bleedthelove on Thursday, 29th March 2007 @ 01:30:08 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

Your darkness standing proud
True devotion, dedication, concentration of the soul
My future wrapped in a dark cloud
Through cleasning
Life beyond existance
The end flows through my veins
Through the sorrow that sustains
High on blind destruction
The lillies of regret are growing wild
And the mirror of my blood on the floor reflects
Your face, so divine
The feeling is something I cannot define
I burn in your flame
Your beauty is my pain
Burn my soul
For you I give all my life
She is rising
Smiling as I lay dying
Her tears fall without crying
Death is beautiful
Shining
She is beautiful
Spreading her black wings
She is suicide
And the mirror of my blood on the floor reflects
Her eyes
With your sweet kiss of death
Words lie empty on my breath
You crucify my world
You crucify my love
Like a dream of perfect bliss
Too beautiful to last.

Copyright © bleedthelove ... [ 2007-03-29 13:30:08]
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Re: Empty On My Breath. (User Rating: 1 )
by darkangeleyes57 on Thursday, 5th April 2007 @ 03:31:15 AM AEST
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Brillant. I felt your emotions throughout the whole poem and I liked the way that it read. Great poem.

Take care
Christina

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