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An Echo of an Echo
Contributed by
xXxmegsxXx
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Wednesday, 28th March 2007 @ 02:22:09 PM in AEST
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An echo of an echo;
Past lives reverberating
Off old graffitied walls,
Indifferent to the world beyond
Which idly passes by.
A small and empty room,
Holding memories of despair,
Standing tall, Unnoticed,
The perfect specimen of neglect.
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2007-03-28 14:22:09]
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Re: An Echo of an Echo
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by Rhei76 on
Wednesday, 28th March 2007 @ 11:39:14 PM AEST
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I like very much.
thinking on the waves of the past and now, turning from where it starts, to where it is, over lapping, confussing if you can't recognize
The small and empty room
where the sound is lost
loud and unnoticed
it's a place to feel neglected
it is a great write. very constructive. |
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Re: An Echo of an Echo
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Friday, 30th March 2007 @ 08:06:06 AM AEST
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Interesting piece, short yet not meaningless.
Sometimes fewer words say far more in the mind of the reader than many ever can
Steve |
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