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i am confused
Contributed by
johndough111
on
Tuesday, 25th February 2003 @ 10:00:00 PM in AEST
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I have been searching for something…
It never appears inside of my head
It waits until the moment where I hang from a thin string
The moment before I’m sure I’ll be dead…
I have been searching for something
A reason to be, a reason not to flee
I look at my friends with a face full of glee
And a heart full of nothing.
This is really happening…
I’m living in a world of dark gray
I cant breath it, I choke, It hurts to see the next day.
If I live, what will I have to give?
Give me something
That is what I have been searching for,
For something
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johndough111
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2003-02-25 22:00:00]
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Re: i am confused
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by venkat on
Wednesday, 26th February 2003 @ 05:57:52 AM AEST
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| ah! it is very good to read. and it is very nice to see a face full of glee. venkat |
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Re: i am confused
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by bobotheclown on
Saturday, 1st March 2003 @ 07:31:06 PM AEST
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I loved this so accurately conveyed. I loved the line "A heart full of nothing" Keep on writing. Your poems rock.
Bobo (Joel) |
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