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Girl in my Dream.
Contributed by
FRANCO
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Wednesday, 28th March 2007 @ 02:37:04 AM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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My waiting heart seek through the smudge world
with a hope for a glimpse of my girl in dream, the passing
cloud and the changing weather mocked at my inanity
yet stood for that one glimpse of my girl in dream.
In the midst of smoldering wilderness,
she came like a benevolent breeze setting my lovesick
heart to freeze; my sick heart longed for her love potion
to be liberated, from this blank forlorn world.
She stood by my side for one decade and half,
lived life for love, love and love alone, until that day
she laid to rest upon lavender; shattering dreams to rubble
left me alone to fumble and tumble like an empty bobble.
My waiting heart seeks through the smudge world with a hope for one last
glimpse of my girl in dream, to seek an answer to the vague frozen dream.
-FRANCO-
Copyright ©
FRANCO
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2007-03-28 02:37:04]
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Re: Girl in my Dream.
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by needledancing on
Wednesday, 28th March 2007 @ 08:09:20 AM AEST
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| A most beautiful read...filled with passion and vivid descriptive emotional devotion. One can only dream of having this written for you..by one so loving. |
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Re: Girl in my Dream.
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by Dom on
Wednesday, 28th March 2007 @ 08:58:21 AM AEST
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Oh Franco this is lovely, your words are beautiful. Memories of a loved one are so precious that you will hold onto them forever even when it has been long time since they left you. You conveyed your emotions very well.
Dom |
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Re: Girl in my Dream.
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 28th March 2007 @ 03:36:18 PM AEST
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Franco, I know not how long ago this was, but I am so sorry for your loss and sorrow.
The words and sentiment within this is testament to your devotion and love for her
still. And it is most beautiful to see, dear friend. Thank you for posting this. It transports
a hope that unending love like this does exists!
Softly sad but entirely exquisite ~
~Breezy |
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Re: Girl in my Dream.
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by MisfitMe on
Wednesday, 28th March 2007 @ 06:44:43 PM AEST
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How incredibly brave of you to lay open such depth of emotion!
In All Admiration
~your feyfriend |
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Re: Girl in my Dream.
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by yangdantien on
Thursday, 29th March 2007 @ 10:56:10 PM AEST
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Ah my brother such loss and pain is irreconcilable and truly the only way to honor such a grand coupling is the continuation of your joy and happiness. Your love would not have it any other way and though your heart limps at first its wings take flight in your shared passions. A great meal, an abundant garden, joy at sunset, art and poems .
Blessings
Yang |
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Re: Girl in my Dream.
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by GingerB on
Thursday, 29th March 2007 @ 11:19:31 PM AEST
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Aww Franco, this brings tears to my eyes. Warm hugs to you and Mario....
Luv and hugs.
Me.... |
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Re: Girl in my Dream.
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Friday, 30th March 2007 @ 08:35:58 AM AEST
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Im sure these were not easy feelings to put into words.
Yet, you have and have done it so movingly.
Sorry for your loss
Steve |
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Re: Girl in my Dream.
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by joydeep_nath on
Friday, 30th March 2007 @ 09:49:10 AM AEST
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| good one but cud have been a lil shorter |
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Re: Girl in my Dream.
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 18th April 2007 @ 03:22:25 PM AEST
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soo beautiful and lovingly penned...
love n' hugs nessa
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