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Storm
Contributed by
Dom
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Tuesday, 27th March 2007 @ 07:53:15 AM in AEST
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Storm beat drum deep,
Wash sky with a bleak grey,
Hold us in claws of steel
As you pour down streams of rain.
Storm flood town’s streets
And sear the sky hot singed
With sheets and bolts of gold,
To awe, to fear, to die.
Storm quench earth’s thirst
After week of bones in heat.
Stale and dry and sloth,
And still in choke of light.
Storm blaze dark rooms,
Turn lights on in my head,
Give me thoughts then words and lines,
I’ll write those down instead.
Copyright ©
Dom
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2007-03-27 07:53:15]
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Re: Storm
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by needledancing on
Tuesday, 27th March 2007 @ 08:24:40 AM AEST
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| Your words make me want to hear the rain and torrent winds howling about me.I'll pass on the lightening...undless I'm inside..lol Great piece. |
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Re: Storm
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by FRANCO on
Tuesday, 27th March 2007 @ 07:33:16 PM AEST
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My friend it is a wonderful recreation of a mammoth storm in words and lines, the light in your head is burning and glowing bright and clear and we all could feel the blowing "Storm."
FRANCO. |
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Re: Storm
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 28th March 2007 @ 03:24:56 PM AEST
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I adore the disturbance of storms .. they are entirely and
passionately alive with emotion.
And you have been successful in trapping the beauty
and awe of one of nature's wildest moods.
Loved reading this one, Dom.
~Breezy |
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Re: Storm
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by deadheadpoet on
Wednesday, 28th March 2007 @ 09:03:19 PM AEST
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I really enjoyed the read. I love a good storm.
Much peace,
Laura |
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Re: Storm
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by yangdantien on
Thursday, 29th March 2007 @ 12:32:30 AM AEST
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I am seeking shelter during these words as they evoke the power of a storm most effectively.
Love that power...
Well Done
Peace
Yang |
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Re: Storm
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by MisfitMe on
Thursday, 29th March 2007 @ 08:28:41 PM AEST
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In my esteem, there is little to compare w/ the uncompromised majesty that is the power of Storms...my usually introverted & somewhat meek self, can raise my arms upward & know what it is to be a Goddess...I have a tremendous affinity for the element of water & I am no stranger to drumming circles, so I was absolutely there w/ this very1st line...
"Storm beat drum deep,"~you
BigLoveMuchPeace
~me
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Re: Storm
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Friday, 30th March 2007 @ 07:17:31 PM AEST
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Dom~
A most exquiste and very well penned piece of poetry. I absolutely love the imagery you cast into your readers head with your excellently penned words. Your poetry is most enjoyable and well worth the read. Thank you for sharing this wonderful well crafted poem with us~
hugs & prayers,
sue m |
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Re: Storm
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by PorcelainCellophane on
Saturday, 31st March 2007 @ 02:04:24 AM AEST
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gorgeous, abrupt imagery and onomatopoeias.
i enjoyed the last stanza 1st & 2nd line the most. great juxtapositioning/contrast.
thanks for sharing. |
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Re: Storm
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by myheartsvoice on
Saturday, 31st March 2007 @ 11:20:59 AM AEST
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Truly a strong poem i like the tittle and i'm from the north eastern part of the united state's called New England grew up by the sea, so this peice of writting is definately my cup of tea, no pun intended lol. i love storms and rain and songs or poetry or paintings depicting anything that even resembles water. Great write, your a true artist who simply let's his brush ruel the canvas. needless to say i enjoyed reading this as well as experiencing it.
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Re: Storm
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by unknown_utopia on
Monday, 2nd July 2007 @ 08:19:40 AM AEST
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well done
I really like this flow.... |
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Re: Storm
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by zenith66 on
Wednesday, 2nd January 2008 @ 05:20:50 AM AEST
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such tremendous stormy words here, reeling me right to the end well done, i cant feel the clap of thunder and the startling boom from the clashing of the clouds, i agree youve captured natures wildest here, fantastic!!!
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