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Everything
Contributed by
nirvana12
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Tuesday, 27th March 2007 @ 12:03:03 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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You're all that I want, you are all that I need. You're the only thing that I think of, but you feel differently.
When Im in my room wishing I was dead you're the only thing running through my head. Well I think about it I dont think it's fair, I would do anything, I would be there. I cant see your eyes never could taste your lips. All that I wanted was for us to kiss, but it just can not be that way. Maybe youll feel the same some different day.
This life is a little wors than hell, during my time here I have never felt well. Nothing can make me laugh I just cry. Longing for your love with teardrops in my eyes.
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Re: Everything
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 27th March 2007 @ 12:17:09 AM AEST
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Very sad but good writing.
Big huggs,
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Re: Everything
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Wednesday, 28th March 2007 @ 12:49:47 PM AEST
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Sad, short yet full of your love and need for this person. Great poem. You did a good job expreesing your feelings.
Take care
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Re: Everything
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by yangdantien on
Thursday, 29th March 2007 @ 11:03:21 PM AEST
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You are getting it out there.
Keep writing brother.
Fall in love with your life and enjoy your passions and surely your true love will be standing alongside you.
In the interim:
"And The Moon And The Stars And The World"
"Long walks at night--
that's what good for the soul:
peeking into windows
watching tired housewives
trying to fight off
their beer-maddened husbands." ~Charles Bukowski
Peace
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