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Listen
Contributed by
katy
on
Monday, 26th March 2007 @ 10:18:57 AM in AEST
Topic:
ambiguous
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Listen,
listen to the birds sing.
Aren't they wonderful?
Listen,
listen to the tress blowing.
Aren't they amazing?
Listen,
listen to her breathing.
Isnt it shallow?
Listen,
listen to her wimpering.
Isnt it harrowing?
Listen,
listen to her fear.
Isnt it frightening?
Listen.
Please listen
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katy
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2007-03-26 10:18:57]
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Re: Listen
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by emystar on
Monday, 26th March 2007 @ 11:21:55 PM AEST
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gOOD WORK. yOU SHOULD GET BORED MORE OFTEN.
HUGGS, SMILES,
emy |
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Re: Listen
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by exstacyk on
Tuesday, 27th March 2007 @ 02:17:08 AM AEST
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ur like me...i write poems when im bored
or very sad!
so simple yet catching.....
it makes u feel....thats wat poetry should do!!! |
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Re: Listen
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by heaviestcat on
Thursday, 5th April 2007 @ 11:04:40 AM AEST
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| Katy, i love the way the emotional intensity of your poem rises like a cresting wave. I may set it to music with your permission. |
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