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Tomorrow
Contributed by
drapes
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Sunday, 25th March 2007 @ 07:29:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Don't choke on your excuses
And wait for my refuses.
These words, they create bruises.
Internal feeling loses.
You leave your soul lying careless,
Exposing confessions scandalous.
Crawling to me helpless,
Your words, they're so distressed.
Today you're not depressed,
So tell me I'm no less
On a chart of you to me.
Just put me down at rest,
Rise above and become free.
Your choice to suffer
Dissatisfies me.
Rocks in the gutter
Cause the water a clutter.
The stream deserves to flowl
Desires, craves, needs to go.
The drain below,
You may as well step in
As fast as fades your grin.
Enjoy your lovely sin,
That happiness won't come again
In a life you've merely quit,
I'll make sure of it!
Copyright ©
drapes
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2007-03-25 19:29:36]
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Re: Tomorrow
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 12th April 2007 @ 04:22:06 PM AEST
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| This is a very well written poem. Very nice |
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Re: Tomorrow
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by Karlee14 on
Friday, 10th August 2007 @ 06:29:21 PM AEST
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I love it. It can be hard to be consistant with that rhyme
scheme.
You pulled it off well. Keep writing, 'cause I'm going to
read all 122 poems you've written 0_0.
~Karlee
P.S. You may or may not remember that you commented
on one of my poems a year ago-ish and they're better
now so you should read them =D |
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