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Our Children . . . Joan & Ben Papa
Contributed by
myheartsvoice
on
Sunday, 25th March 2007 @ 02:51:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I
look
at our children
and see me and you,
what love ever lasting
can realy
do.
I
look
at our daughters
and i'm in awe, once again
love has proven to be without
flaw.
I
look
at our son
and speechless i am,
much
like a shepard who love's his
lamb.
But
little they
are not any more,
laughing and romping
about on the
floor.
Yet
close to our hearts
they still remain,
'tis
there they can come in
from out of the
rain.
Now
once again
there is just
you and i,
loving each other
as time goes
by.
And
yet if my yesterday
i need recall i just look
at our children,
that
say's it
all.
Joan & Ben Papa
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myheartsvoice
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Re: Our Children . . . Joan & Ben Papa
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by shelby on
Sunday, 25th March 2007 @ 05:48:58 PM AEST
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Oh Ben my friend,
this is what its all about. Joan you must keep on writing here with Ben, the two of you did great!
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Re: Our Children . . . Joan & Ben Papa
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Sunday, 25th March 2007 @ 10:53:09 PM AEST
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Absolutely beautiful~
I thoroughly enjoyed this wonderful co-write by you and Joan. It warms the heart and puts a smile on the face. Two loving hearts beating as one. Blessed you both are my dear friend. Thanks so much for sharing this beautiful piece of poetry with us.
much love n hugs to you both,
sue m |
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Re: Our Children . . . Joan & Ben Papa
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by emystar on
Monday, 26th March 2007 @ 12:56:14 AM AEST
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Good work both of you. I really can't tell where one of you begins and the other picks it up. yOU TWO TRULY ARE ONE AND YA'LL PROVED IT IN THIS LUVLY WRITE. oops, my finger slipped.
Joan it's nice to meet you. I'm sure you know that I'm a fan of Bens and now both of you.
I don't know if bens ever told you but I tell him all the time that his great writes to you restores my faith in some men.
You two have a luv that will forever live on.
Awesome work now, more from both of you, please.
Big huggs, much luv, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Our Children . . . Joan & Ben Papa
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by MisfitMe on
Tuesday, 27th March 2007 @ 12:19:14 AM AEST
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Wow, it's soooo cool to meet the muse. You had a lot to live up to, Joan, as evidenced by Bennys prior writes & damn if ya' didn't live up to it all, Lady!
Great job, you two!
BigLoveMuchPeace
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Re: Our Children . . . Joan & Ben Papa
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 25th April 2007 @ 02:54:39 PM AEST
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awww! sweet!!! blessings to you both:)
love n' hugs nessa
roses |
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