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Tranqility

Contributed by lillyjane on Sunday, 25th March 2007 @ 10:41:15 AM in AEST
Topic: NaturePoetry

Theres a place. I go to be alone,
a special place I call my own,
it helps me see, life has meaning,
where I can rest, lazily dreaming,
through the soil, poke the first spring bulbs,
the sun kissed lake a hue of gold,
pink apple blossom on the trees,
float to the floor in a gentle breeze,
the beauty there has no bounds,
just natures smells,natures sounds,
graceful swans glide, on a tranquil lake
twittering of birds as nests they make,
waterlilies, open to the sun,
spring is here, at last its begun,
as I feel the sun upon my face.
I thank the Lord, for this special place,

Copyright © lillyjane ... [ 2007-03-25 10:41:15]
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Re: Tranqility (User Rating: 1 )
by Muhammadshanazar on Sunday, 25th March 2007 @ 01:32:24 PM AEST
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The poem is from top to toe a sublime description of nature, and Lord's blessings; O! God, bestow Man wisdom and sense to make secure spheres of the earth. Nice piece.
Shanazar
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Re: Tranqility (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Sunday, 25th March 2007 @ 05:54:45 PM AEST
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Thanks for sharing a restful place within your beautiful words.
Michelle

Re: Tranqility (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 26th March 2007 @ 02:50:11 AM AEST
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A peice of heaven on Planet Earth.
Beautifull.
huggs, smiles, serinity,
emy

Re: Tranqility (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Friday, 27th April 2007 @ 05:37:10 AM AEST
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beautiful:)

love n' hugs nessa

Re: Tranqility (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Friday, 27th April 2007 @ 05:30:27 PM AEST
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Sounds like a very nice place.
Can i join you? :)
you did great on this write.

hugs

Re: Tranqility (User Rating: 1 )
by Dom on Friday, 11th May 2007 @ 04:05:54 AM AEST
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Beautifully calming, your descriptions are mesmerising, I particularly liked these lines:
"the sun kissed lake a hue of gold,
pink apple blossom on the trees,
float to the floor in a gentle breeze"

I have a similar place where I can go, this write reminded me of it and made me thankful that such places exist.

Take care,
Dom

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