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scorpions
Contributed by
damned_saint
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Saturday, 24th March 2007 @ 05:47:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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red and black
death and love...
water and air
brings you life...
a body with no soul
a heart cold and empty
like the rivers
we'll never know
time flies slowly
nowhere to go
everyday is empty
years are hollow
you turn your back now
leaving me...
with only memories left
i'll face the light
one thing to ask
should i wait or not?
i'll never forget
even if you want me to...
i won't forget
even though i should
i won't leave
i'm everywhere you go...
even if i expire
i'll come back for you
and when you breath
i'll be the air around you
and when you sleep
i'll be there watching over you...
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2007-03-24 17:47:27]
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Re: scorpions
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by emystar on
Saturday, 24th March 2007 @ 11:34:54 PM AEST
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Very creativly written.
If you want comments you need to comment.
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Re: scorpions
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by hauntedscorp on
Sunday, 25th March 2007 @ 07:08:05 PM AEST
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Some wonderful emotional expression here... Not so sure what the title means with respect to the poem, but it drew me in either way : )
This is my favourite part right here:
I'll never forget
even if you want me to...
I won't forget
even though I should
I won't leave
I'm everywhere you go...
~Scorp. |
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