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LONELY FOOTPRINTS
Contributed by
Wesley_Dale_Willis
on
Tuesday, 25th February 2003 @ 06:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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As I walk along the beach,
Alone, in the soft sand,
Thinking of you
I turn around to see if you were there,
I only see,two footprints,
Just two footprints following,
Following quietly,
My lonely footprints,
I remember
Remember four footprints following,
You standing in one,
And I the other,
Us together
We loved each other dear,
We use to listen,
Listen together,
Of the clapping waves,
Sprinting towards us,
Then falling away, quietly
The bright blazing orange,
of the sun,
Burning down westward,
The moon overhead,
Catching its orange glow.
Laughter, our laughter,
The clapping waves,and our laughter together,
Footprints of our past following,
In the smooth sand,
Just ahead,
Waiting, waiting for our future,
Hand in hand,
Walking, laughing, loving,
Yes, loving, together,
Watching the sun fall asleep,
And the stars awakening above
The past,
Our footprints together,
Washed away by clapping waves,
Only my footprints now,
Alone, All- alone,
Searching,
Alone, alone,
The smooth sandy beach,
Lonely footprints, gone,
Only the sound,
Of clapping waves,
Falling away, quietly,
Quietly, yes quietly.
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2003-02-25 18:20:00]
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Re: LONELY FOOTPRINTS
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by mblondiepink on
Wednesday, 26th February 2003 @ 03:23:46 AM AEST
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| I really liked this one. It reminds me of walking along the beach at night alone and thinking of love from my past. |
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Re: LONELY FOOTPRINTS
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by Wesley_Dale_Willis on
Wednesday, 26th February 2003 @ 07:37:58 AM AEST
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| THANK YOU VERY MUCH. |
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Re: LONELY FOOTPRINTS
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by a_bear on
Tuesday, 17th February 2004 @ 08:30:59 AM AEST
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I cry, therefore I am. This one clutches at my heart. It's beautiful.....
a_bear |
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Re: LONELY FOOTPRINTS
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by lostinmyself on
Tuesday, 17th February 2004 @ 07:37:14 PM AEST
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| this brought tears to my eyes....truly great. luv phil xxx |
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Re: LONELY FOOTPRINTS
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by New_York_Chick on
Thursday, 19th February 2004 @ 08:10:52 PM AEST
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thnx for your comment =]
i read a few of your poems, but i loved this one the most.. it's so sad, but so beautiful |
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Re: LONELY FOOTPRINTS
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by angelrae on
Saturday, 21st February 2004 @ 11:22:19 PM AEST
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| A beautiful poem, thank you; I enjoyed reading it very much. A poem from your heart, I am sure. |
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Re: LONELY FOOTPRINTS
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by srugglingyoungster on
Sunday, 14th March 2004 @ 01:17:09 AM AEST
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| WES! How do you do it? again and again you manage to make another heart-felt poem! I loved it, alot! |
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