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Thought-Bites
Contributed by
bhavik
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Saturday, 24th March 2007 @ 07:21:56 AM in AEST
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abstract
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Hello do you hear me?
Are you there?
Hey,you know something i miss you?
Come on,don't be a spoil sport
I need you my friend.
Please don't do this to me,
stay with me,
I can't live without you,
I will die when you leave,
I will go crazy without you.
Haven't we all said thats mentioned about and more in some point of time in our life?
Yes, we have.
Then why is it so that these sentences never lose their value when someone utters them in some corner of this world?
I feel the way these sentences are said make a huge difference,
if your tongue helps you say it,your eyes,face hand need to back it up.
What is this world ?
Nothing without people,feelings,mother nature and above all love.
Someone said "Love can move mountains"
I don't subscribe to that thought,
one thing is for sure it helps me move.
Copyright ©
bhavik
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2007-03-24 07:21:56]
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Re: Thought-Bites
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by Butterat_Zool on
Sunday, 25th March 2007 @ 01:20:35 AM AEST
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This reminds me of one i wrote called Freelance Philosophy. It borders very closely on not being a poem at all, but it's an interesting bite nonetheless, and a form that too-often ignored in poetry.
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Re: Thought-Bites
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by Whisper on
Wednesday, 28th March 2007 @ 12:48:25 PM AEST
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Nice write
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