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For Her
Contributed by
JuJuQueen
on
Saturday, 24th March 2007 @ 03:39:41 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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So soft were the words that fell off her lips
swept away my tears and positioned my breath.
So strong were the hands she used
To carry my pain and their pain too
So hopeful was the smile she gave
That I believed I could be like her
So safe was the shadow she cast
I feared no pain nor death
So much was her love
I fear I will love nothing again without her
So much do I miss her
So much do I love her
So much am I lost without her
So much is a mother
so little is a child without her
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JuJuQueen
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2007-03-24 03:39:41] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: For Her
(User Rating: 1 ) by Dom on
Saturday, 24th March 2007 @ 03:54:12 AM AEST (User
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You did convey it perfectly, this was heartbreakingly beautiful and very well written, so much so that it made me experience these emotions myself.
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