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Friender Tender
Contributed by
needledancing
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Friday, 23rd March 2007 @ 10:41:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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I don’t care what you think of me
I’m just a poet now set free
To analyze and fantasize and use the dictionary
Don’t need your human blessings I have a visionary
That all my words will fall upon the ears now meant to be
The souls all trapped in helpless hearts that now can be set free.
Learn as I unleash my words I speak of knowing you
I serve a Universe of love and these words will be true.
No need of fear for all I write I plead it comforts heart
It’s how it was transferred to me from the Universes start
Come close my fellow souls I ask and give me audience
For I have seen so much in life it’s really worth the chance.
I claim no ego as a prize I've learned my lessons bleeding
By reaching in my passions page I feel the pulses pleading
When pain has tortured, torn your soul and life is at its end
Please send your poems name this hurt to one who is a FRIEND
Copyright ©
needledancing
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Re: Friender Tender
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by FRANCO on
Friday, 23rd March 2007 @ 11:25:58 PM AEST
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It is a noble thought presented with wonderful and compassionate manner.
GREAT.
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Re: Friender Tender
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by MisfitMe on
Friday, 23rd March 2007 @ 11:29:50 PM AEST
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The sentiment held herein is one of precious warmth & I want to stand closer to the fires light...
BigLoveMuchPeace
~me |
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Re: Friender Tender
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by artjunkiekyle on
Saturday, 24th March 2007 @ 12:31:21 AM AEST
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SIMPLY WONDERFUL! THANKS FOR POSTING.
-KYLE |
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Re: Friender Tender
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by emystar on
Saturday, 24th March 2007 @ 12:51:18 AM AEST
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Very passonate full with compassion for others.
Big huggs,
emy |
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Re: Friender Tender
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by Dom on
Saturday, 24th March 2007 @ 04:00:37 AM AEST
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As others have commented before me, compassionate is the perfect word to describe this. Your warm heart shines through, it was lovely,
Take care,
Dom |
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Re: Friender Tender
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by Rhei76 on
Saturday, 24th March 2007 @ 05:22:05 PM AEST
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Wonderful and strong words
Great piece |
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Re: Friender Tender
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by lillyjane on
Sunday, 25th March 2007 @ 05:08:39 AM AEST
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| I think this beautiful poem reveals what a kind caring person you truly are..xxx |
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Re: Friender Tender
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by hauntedscorp on
Sunday, 25th March 2007 @ 04:49:21 PM AEST
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I really love this piece... the great flow alone makes my heart skip a beat, but it's the from-the-heart-expression here that really makes it worth the read, and begs further contemplation. This is a totally selfless post, and I thank you for sharing.
~Scorp.
(Who should mention she loves the title too!) |
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Re: Friender Tender
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 25th March 2007 @ 11:12:15 PM AEST
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My dear friend, this is what makes you such an exceptional
person. You extraordinary heart. Unyielding in it's quest to
free the world of pain and hurt. ♥
Your heart is a true wonder and blessing hun. Beautiful
post. :)
*hugs*
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Re: Friender Tender
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by brew on
Monday, 26th March 2007 @ 08:32:05 PM AEST
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Compassion, no shallowness, just heart. Simple, and beautiful....they way alot of writes should be. Loved the heart put into what you came up with
Brew~ |
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Re: Friender Tender
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 29th April 2007 @ 02:03:22 AM AEST
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your loving honest heart of kindness shine in this write,
love n' hugs nessa
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