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Release
Contributed by
itsnotme
on
Friday, 23rd March 2007 @ 09:31:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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In
The day
In the night
When you finally give up the fight
When your heart is broken
You can’t see the light
heart so tight
You die every night
When it’s late at night
One day you will see the light
Your heart is no longer broken
No longer tight
Just look inwards and see the light
Shining bright
Trust me I know
You will be all right
I died every night
After that fight
Now you mean nothing
Nothing to me
I no longer die
every night
I can see the light
Trust me I know you’ll be all right
No longer a fight
Now its over
I know I am going to be
All right
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itsnotme
... [
2007-03-23 21:31:02]
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Re: Release
(User Rating: 1 )
by artjunkiekyle on
Friday, 23rd March 2007 @ 10:13:05 PM AEST
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congratulations on overcoming your struggles. this poem seems to reflect you and your personality quite well as a very strong person. thanks for posting.
-kyle |
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Re: Release
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by Sena on
Friday, 23rd March 2007 @ 11:11:03 PM AEST
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| very expressive...I can relate. |
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Re: Release
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by needledancing on
Friday, 23rd March 2007 @ 11:25:00 PM AEST
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| Wow..living proof we can get over it...I've been saying that for awhile now...I love this work..inspiration and hard facts....look at you you survived...thank you I needed you here. |
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