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Nothing
Contributed by
ivoryA
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Friday, 23rd March 2007 @ 06:32:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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This is me
Here I am
I’m trying
Understanding
You and me
Together
Finally
You lying
Once again
I’m dying
You held me
Told me
Kissed me
Pushed me away
Again
Like always
Meant to be—
nothing
Copyright ©
ivoryA
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2007-03-23 18:32:41]
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Re: Nothing
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by artjunkiekyle on
Friday, 23rd March 2007 @ 07:40:07 PM AEST
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short yet so powerful. i'm truly sorry for your inconvenience with life-sometimes it overlooks what we deserve. beautifully written. thanks for posting.
-kyle |
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Re: Nothing
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by needledancing on
Friday, 23rd March 2007 @ 11:52:50 PM AEST
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This is the simply put statement of what people think...when there is nothing there.
So you trust your instincts and keep looking...your something is out there..I am glad you wrote this. So many do not listen to IT'S not happening....trust it. Let me here the write of when it IS happening....The alpha/omega happening...... |
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Re: Nothing
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by Drapes on
Sunday, 25th March 2007 @ 07:13:23 PM AEST
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| Very nicely written, I love the form. Powerfully, emotional. Very nice. -Drapes |
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