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A Lonesome Figure
Contributed by
CowgirlKid
on
Tuesday, 25th February 2003 @ 05:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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A lonesome figure stands on the beach,
Gazing out to sea,
A lonesome figure, tall and slim,
Longing to be free,
With a heavy heart, she whispers to the water raging by,
But her desperate pleas simply seep away,
Nobody hears her cries.
Her mind is running wild, her body without a soul,
She's waiting for the one she loves,
Waiting to be whole,
Tears run freely down her face,
The waves lap at her toes,
From the world she holds a million secrets,
Of a million, all remain unknown.
A lonesome figure stands on the beach,
Gazing out to sea,
A lonesome figure tall and slim,
That lonesome figure's me.
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CowgirlKid
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2003-02-25 17:20:00]
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Re: A Lonesome Figure
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by LJ on
Tuesday, 25th February 2003 @ 07:07:23 PM AEST
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| Very Nice Write!!! It is beatuiful and yet so sad. |
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Re: A Lonesome Figure
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by DreamWeaver on
Tuesday, 25th February 2003 @ 08:15:30 PM AEST
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| There is nothing more soothing to the soul than standing on a beach looking out to sea, when feeling sad. Lovely write. |
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Re: A Lonesome Figure
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by Bizzy on
Thursday, 27th March 2003 @ 05:20:20 PM AEST
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CowgirlKid, you've painted quite a picture here!
Its so sad and lonely, but still beautiful. I guess it would be a place of healing for a broken heart. Love, Grandma Bizzy |
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