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Keep Me Going

Contributed by daydreamer22 on Thursday, 22nd March 2007 @ 10:28:48 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

lonely nights full of pain
will things ever be the same
brown eyes pouring tears
why cant i escape my fears
im scared to love
and nothing is alright
cant you just stay with me tonight
ive been hurt one too many times
only to create these painful rhymes
ive lost my mind
one day at a time
dont worry though ill be fine
ill fake a big beautiful smile
and pretend to be happy for a little while
youll never see through me
im just being what you want me to be
no matter how bright the sun shines
my heart is encased with thorned black vines
maybe youll take the knife out of my back
and i can get my life on the right track
wont someone show me just how to feel
only then will my smile be real
so take my hand and pull me out
please teach me what love is truly about
pull me close and press your lips to mine
so my heart will feel that everything is fine
i see now what love can do
for now i am in love with you

Copyright © daydreamer22 ... [ 2007-03-22 22:28:48]
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Re: Keep Me Going (User Rating: 1 )
by darkangeleyes57 on Wednesday, 28th March 2007 @ 12:59:57 PM AEST
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I hope you can keep these feelings of love and I hope that it helps you grow and that you will know what love is and how it truly feels. This was good. I liked your feelings and emotions that were expressed through your words.

Take care
Christina

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