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In my Darkest Dreams

Contributed by Loriann on Thursday, 22nd March 2007 @ 09:39:12 AM in AEST
Topic: DreamsandWishes

Deep inside my darkest dreams.
Not all is what it seems

Gloominess with such despair.
Surrounds me all around and everywhere.

A darkened abyss with sadness all around.
Engulfing my ears with such a hideous sound.

Screams and cackles come at me from all sides.
twisting my whole being that lays inside.

Inside my soul
so empty and cold.

Nothing to brighten my way.
Just a continuing void each and everyday.

Darkness lies within my darkest dreams.
Where everything maybe as it seems.

Only complete sorrow no happiness.
Laying at the bottom of a cold darkened abyss.

The cold bitter breeze swirling all around.
No end to this deranged dream can be found.

Scowling eyes peeking from deep into the dark.
Accompanied by a greusome grin of teeth like a shark.

Sending such shivers down my weakend spine.
Praying that soon it will be over and I will be fine.

Til that time comes I continue to dream.
The darkest and saddest and so it may seem.

Copyright © Loriann ... [ 2007-03-22 09:39:12]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: In my Darkest Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by kelkel on Thursday, 22nd March 2007 @ 01:15:47 PM AEST
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Very nice lori good poem

Re: In my Darkest Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by myheartsvoice on Tuesday, 27th March 2007 @ 04:49:57 PM AEST
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I like the myserious quality of this write. i actualy felt a chill reading it and a bit vulnerable. Great peice of writting endowed with much conviction.

Ben

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