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Poetic Rising
Contributed by
unknown_utopia
on
Wednesday, 21st March 2007 @ 10:10:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Something was lost
but now
It has been found
and
in the distance
I see it
slowly
coming into view...
music sweetly plays
flowing
in the background
I silently sway
under
a full moon,
anticipation
has a hold of me now
I'm so excited
I don't know what to do.
I can feel it
it's almost here now
I shiver and shake
as thrilling sensations run through,
anticipation
is spinning me 'round
I get so excited
that I don't know what to do.
Tears of joy flow
as I see
what I lost is now found,
it was that feeling I get
when a new InnerVision
vibrates
and slowly comes into view.
Copyright ©
unknown_utopia
... [
2007-03-21 22:10:09]
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Re: Poetic Rising
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by Spike on
Thursday, 22nd March 2007 @ 02:49:54 AM AEST
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Cool interpretation of the birthing of an idea. It truly is a buzz.
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Re: Poetic Rising
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by Fionndruinne on
Thursday, 22nd March 2007 @ 03:40:35 AM AEST
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Epiphany is a beautiful thing.
And this is a beautifully captured sentiment. Well done.
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Re: Poetic Rising
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by emystar on
Thursday, 22nd March 2007 @ 03:45:46 AM AEST
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Go Tony, Go.
Awesome writing.
huggs, smiles,
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Re: Poetic Rising
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 25th April 2007 @ 01:47:16 PM AEST
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this is beautiful...
love n' hugs nessa |
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