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A Night
Contributed by
aloneinthememory
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Wednesday, 21st March 2007 @ 08:20:21 PM in AEST
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musics blaring
rooms jumping
tonights show is one of a kind
between the moshing, music, dancing
you still found the time
you grabbed my hands
we started dancing
for an instant
blissfullness
bumping into everyone
who cares who sees
Its just you and me
everyone's staring
for once I dont care
let them stare
nothings ruining my night.
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2007-03-21 20:20:21]
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Re: A Night
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 21st March 2007 @ 10:06:47 PM AEST
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How about "My Night" instaed?
I like the short lines, very poignant. |
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Re: A Night
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by Rockalife66 on
Friday, 29th June 2007 @ 03:16:39 PM AEST
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| Very nice. That definitely would be a nihgt I would never forget. |
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